[Solution] Effects of Single Parenthood
I would put a bit more thought into your passage about “criminal behavior,” though. Not because I disagree with you, but right now it’s coming across as a generalization even with the source backing you up. My suggestion would be to expand a bit more on your source’s claim– why does she feel that way? What more does she say to elaborate on this claim? What is her evidence? And finally, how do you feel about this? Is there a counterargument?
I would put a bit more thought into your passage about “criminal behavior,” though. Not because I disagree with you, but right now it’s coming across as a generalization even with the source backing you up. My suggestion would be to expand a bit more on your source’s claim– why does she feel that way? What more does she say to elaborate on this claim? What is her evidence? And finally, how do you feel about this? Is there a counterargument?
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